If you see missing images in posts, we lost about 100k of 'em in 03/2022.
Started by ilovescissors, 16-Jun-15, 03:15 PM
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Quote from: Stewie_Griffin on 16-Jun-15, 03:55 PMAwesome narrative, ILS..... good job!
Quote from: Smothered123 on 21-Jun-15, 07:55 PMWhen he said ILS that was short for your nick name. All I would add is to avoid such large, unbroken blocks of print, it's really hard on the eyes and makes it difficult to read. Try breaking up the narrative into more digestible chunks, it will improve the flow, other than that a great first story.
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