Thank you, I really appreciate the feedback, it's one of the main reasons why I publicly post. I like to know what people are looking for as well as any other way to improve my stories and my writing. I've written around 35 stories total, at least the ones that were any good to post any where, and they are all combat stories. I'm willing to write about anything that people are looking for, it's why I'm here, I want to know what other people want. I'm glad you enjoyed my story, and I hope other people on here do as well. I'm not looking for karma, I just want to put my work out there. Thank you for taking the time and converting it to an audio file, I'm grateful. I'm going to see how my two stories do on here and if they do well, I will post others. Thanks again
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